Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Treatment

The Alien Who Kind of Saved Christmas

Ordinary world- Borx, the leader of the aliens is having trouble with his people. They all want to blow up Earth, but Borx doesn't want to blow up Earth, instead he wants to set up an amusment park there. He anxiously awaits the alien council's vote as to the fate of Earth.

Call to Adventure- An alien comes on the intercom, and the council decides to destroy Earth. Borx really doesn't want that. So to save Earth, he must find the lost Whip of Obediance.

Refusal of the Call- Borx doesn't want to use a whip on his people, but then the alien on the intercom says that they will destroy Earth in 12 hours. So he goes to the Intergalactic Lost and Found bin.

Meeting the Mentor- He meets the Intergalactic Lost and Found Director and he pulls out a list of things in the storage area. He then gives him directions tot the appropriate area.

Crossing the Threshold- Borx hesitates because it's a big Intergalactic Lost and Found room, and he really doesn't want to use the Whip of Obediance, then the intercom tells how much time until Earth goes boom. Borx sets out to find the whip of obediance.

Test, Allies, and Enemies- Borx gets lost for twenty minutes, and he finds a GPS, who helps him find his way out of the pets section. On the way out, he gets an intergalactic poodle, and sets off to the location of the Whip of Obediance. The intergalactic poodle pees on him, and Borx sends it back to the pets section.

Approach to the inmost cave- He finds the bin that has the Whip of Obediance, but it's under guard.

The ordeal-Borx politely asks the guards for the whip, they say no, then he orders them to give it up, and they say no. He finally produces credentials proving he is their leader, and then they give Borx, the Whip of Obediance.

The reward-He gets the Whip of Obediance, the one thing that can save Earth.

The Road Back-The intercom announces there is 4 hours left until Earth goes boom. So Borx uses his GPS and finds his way out of the Lost and found, he tips the Director, and makes his way back. By then the council knows what he did, and they don't want to obey, so they send guards after him. He orders them down, but they keep coming.

The Ressurection- Borx uses the Whip of Obediance and makes the guards stand down.

Return with the Elixer- Borx proceeds to the council and makes them obey him with the Whip of Obediance, and they turn off the big gun that was going to destroy Earth. Borx then beams down to Earth and tells him what he did. It incidentally happened to be Christmas and all Earth cries, "You saved Christmas! Yay!" Borx then puts his amusement park on Earth, which pisses off the Earthlings. Borx also forgot to take the Whip of Obediance with him, so he had no control over the council who blew up Earth anyway.
The End

Hero-Borx
Mentor-Intergalactic lost and found director
Threshold guardian- Borx's hesitation/ lost and found area
Herald-Interdcom alien
Shadow-The council
Trickster-Intergalactic Poodle

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