Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Love Poem

Love is astronomical.
The players are like molecules drifting throughout the universe.
Should the right particles meet, they bond and become one.
But there are infinite amounts of molecules in the universe.
My perfect element is close, so close, yet we do not bond.
And space is very empty.

2 comments:

  1. I love the different items that you use to describe love. It feels like a smooth flowing poem.

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  2. Very short. But effective. Love is astronomical. And space is very empty. I like how the poem comes full circle. I think of a magnet. Close, but still pushing apart, depending on the side (negative/positive).

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